In the Fallow Field
How many sweet and savage summers lie buried here, their weedy bones telling the story with a wavering, pale gold voice like chimes across a canyon or a sprinkle of glitter falling, falling like false...
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Quote:Now winters live like embers ondeath's dust.It was always you shining therelike the crocus,like the gold that blooms in snow. Well, what was I saying about nature? Every year I run out (well,...
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God woman...you write like the angels sing.Your detail is gorgeous.
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Hi Patricia,Somehow I think the page smiles when you take up the pen.I believe Lisa said it best when she exclaimed, "god woman..."This verse was writ with power! Not instilled with some heavyhanded...
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oh, this is dazzling and beautiful, patricia. and the ending:Now winters live like embers on death's dust. It was always you shining there like the crocus, like the gold that blooms in snow.just...
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Patricia,I sank deeply into this and swam about, not wanting to leave.There are no words strong enough to express the feelings ofthis poem for me. love to you, sylvia
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Cass, thank you for relating so well to the symbolism. Your insights are such a blessing to me. Lisa: As one who values your opinion, Im simply overwhelmed by your generous comments. THANK YOU! Luke:...
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Gracefully crafted...I am a child of Winter, snowfall merely is part of the reflection of me. I know and love chill, summer often breaks upon me with rashes and tries to burn my winter sensitive skin....
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Thank you kindly for your gorgeous expressions and appreciation for my own love of winter. Many blessings, dear poet. Patricia
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Not so hard to respond.Hell this bit cries.That aside.Cold is all the palces everyonehas some shiver.Winter hides sideways.Expectation wanting to thaw.Rugged frost-bite.Did you notice?Fingertips...
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Patricia Joan Jones ,Damm! This is just great writing.Joe Love is ).A key. ) With no Lock.*)(.Hate (. is a...*`Lock-.with no.*) .-.Key.-. (* .. *~Gemni Man~* `...` ` `..`
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